Y’know, I was looking forward to the introduction of the black-haired twintail from the OP, but it turns out she brings all the shouty. Let’s keep her seen-but-not-heard from now on, okay?

Before that, though, is the fight we’ve all been waiting for, or at least for it to be over with, since the failure condition set by Our Sociopathic Rockstar Hero would basically end the show. His methods will never make him any friends, but his goal is to light a fire under Our Shy Heroine Shy’s cute little ass, and he succeeds. As a bonus, her powers are no longer generic.

Verdict: the big fight is full of tell-don’t-show, but it still manages to move things forward and develop Shy’s character. I’m still enjoying it. Also, “Praise Conflict!”

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